Interpreting Meter and Rhyme in William Blake's the Chimney Sweeper

In William Blake's Chimney Sweeper of the Song ofstanza include dark and work. The dark blacks out
Innocence, there is an immense contrast betweenthe wonderfully colorful imagery and the drudgery
the death, weeping, exploitation, and oppression thatwork end the playing, fun and happiness. The k's
Tom Dacre endures and the childlike innocence thatprovide a hard sound which creates emphasis on
enables his to be naive about his grave situation andTom's conditions that the author doesn't want us to
the widespread injustice in society. Tom Dacre'sforget. The author is subtly appealing for the justice
imagination takes him on a lovely journey with hisof Tom and therefore he needed to create the
ultimate hope of being nurtured and cared for by Hissame bleak feeling in the choice of words as the
Father in Heaven. William Blake creates sympathy andchildren in the "coffins of black" are feeling
sharp awareness for Tom Dacre, who representssubconsciously. If the last stanza has the same
other neglected children in poverty, by introducing hisrhyme scene of as the dream the readers would
personal tragedy at the beginning of the poem. Wehave been tempted to believe the promise of a true
weep with Tom as his innocence is being forciblypositive ending for Tom to maintain his blind and
stolen from him and his sacrificial life to society issimple obedience.
emphasized and William Blake shares narrative of hisThe last two lines use the words warm and harm
hair like a lamb's fur is shaved off. The middle of thethat appears to be rhyme by a glance at the spelling
poem brings heartfelt smiles as we witness thebut the author tricks the readers and instead the
pristine plain being enjoyed by children filled withwords sound different. This prevents the readers
laughter and happiness. However this creates morefrom just flowing aimlessly and carelessly through the
compassion and heartbreak from the reader, aspoem as if it were a cute nursery rhyme and
Tom's intense longing to be free from suffering isinterrupting us to bring even more attention to the
move evident.message. This was also done in the second stanza
At the end of the poem, Tom is given a message towith head and said; bare and hair with spelling that
stay a good boy, which produces conflict in emotionlooks differently but rhymes so that we could pay
for the reader. The reader wants to be as innocentclose attention, but the lack of rhyme in the last
and hopeful and believe the same message but asstanza adds more intensity. The lack of rhyme
corruption grows and the unfairness of such areflects the common theme in life that appearances
complex life continues, the promise seems empty,often don't portray reality. Although the message of
impossible to fulfill and almost hurtful. We cringe asthe angel brings comfort, is the messenger truly an
we reflect on the historic means that the powerfulangel and is Tom truly understanding how to conquer
would use to take advantage of the defenseless,the trials in life? There is only a matter of time
those that were economically disadvantaged andbefore the harm does come and continues to come
lacked high social status. The psychological, politicalwhich is a natural part of life, especially in societies
and religious philosophies and commands that morallythat crush the poor and neglect the orphan child, and
bankrupt leaders used to encourage imposing theirwhen the times comes will Tom be able to stay
own self suppression and accepting the dictatorshipwarm in long term? The situation is appearing
of those in power.temporarily good because of the promise and Tom's
However the last stanza quiets the question of thenaive hope, in reality the consequences are sober and
validity of the message and holds the "bright key" tofull of grief.
unlock the true, deep message of the poem. WhileThe lack of rhyme purposefully and effectively
the rest of Chimney Sweeper is in a simple melodiccreates a huge disconnect from the rest of Chimney
AA, BB rhyme scheme, William Blake allows the lastSweeper. In a sense this last stanza is not just a
stanza to have no perfectly rhymed end words orconclusion but a separate stanza of its own. Because
scheme. The author is proclaiming a lesson thatof the last stanza the readers are confirmed in their
cannot be ignored using this technique appeal to theuncomfortable feelings about the promise and Tom's
audience. The sudden lack of rhyme is an abruptdesperate desire for freedom and life. The optimistic
return to the harsh realities away from the innocentoutlook, although comforting and real to Tom, is
and youthful fantasy of Tom that is almost likerevealed to be unrealistic on earth which Tom may
reality to him waiting to be fulfilled. Unlike the excitingnot wholeheartedly understand. However William
and wistful tone of the beautiful dream with happyBlake does comprehend the grim conditions and is
rhyming ends words such as key and free; run andappealing for social change.
sun; boy and joy the unrhymed words in the last