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Article #24: Writing From The Edge: Trembling Your Way to Publication

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A few nights ago in the final class of by skirting around some of the most
the third incarnation of the Book horrific and personally revealing
Proposal Boot Camp, we reviewed parts of elements of her story.
one author's proposal and all concurred: In the gentle-yet-honest way we aim for
Though her author bio and marketing in the Boot Camps, the class let Delicia
analysis sections sparkled, her overview know that she was jumping over the best
rambled and failed to clearly convey the parts. We wanted to hear more of the
power of her book's message. This was not nitty gritty: her search for identity,
due to her content! Dr. Loraine Hutchins' the struggle for approval of the women
book is about sacred sexual healers, she admired, the physical dangers and how
quite a juicy topic. I was a bit they paralleled her childhood terror.
surprised to read the rather flaccid At one point, Delicia casually recounted
Overview. This was Dr. Hutchins' second a journey to Africa prior to the Peace
Boot Camp (all Boot Camp attendees get Corps stint. In that first journey, she
free repetition of the Camp for the life described how she survived an assault and
of the project they began with), and I attempted rape. We all wanted to know
had seen much tighter prose from her in immediately whether and how that
prior classes. experience impacted the story she
Finally, Loraine (as she is known to us) presented in her memoir. She asked us
admitted she was scared to put tentatively, "Do you think I should
herself-that is, her unique ideas-out include that part?" We all practically
into the world. I validated her screamed, "Yes!"
fear-revealing oneself on paper can bring The class went on to tease out the
up one's worst demons. I said something "hero's journey" elements of Delicia's
like, "Overwriting can serve as a way of storyline, and help her structure the
padding yourself against the piece for maximum impact and reader
vulnerability of exposure." We wondered engagement. We helped her tie in early
if that's what academics did all the scenarios of being left home alone
time. Since this particular writer was terrified, to the dangers she encountered
adapting an academic work for a larger in remote parts of Africa under the
audience, she was struggling to filter auspices of the Peace Corps, whose
out the jargon and polish her message to leaders failed to help her cope. Her
clarity. story now uses the passages of childhood
Loraine's book, Harlots and Healers, recollections to help flesh out the
reveals the history, contribution and nuances of the narrator's motives,
culture of modern day sacred sexual actions and emotions in the Peace Corps
healers. Because her book deals with a setting. Said Delicia,
controversial topic, people who perform "I felt as if I was flailing in all
sexual services for others as a directions before Jill's class. I still
profession or vocation, her fear has some have a mountain of work to do, but now
basis in realistic perceptions of how I'm doing it with focus and honesty, and
others might react to her material. I am certain that I have a much better
Loraine is no stranger to controversial, chance of getting it published."
or for that matter, groundbreaking work. I admire both Loraine and Delicia for
Her first book, an anthology co-edited their courage in standing on difficult
with Lani Ka'ahumanu (who will be coming social and emotional edges, each author
out with new works of her own in the near writing a book only she can write. In my
future) was called Bi Any Other Name: experience, the most interesting writing
Bisexual People Speak Out. An anthology pushes some kind of edge, be it personal,
of writing by bisexual authors, it still social, or simply the edge of what we
earns royalties ten years later, a rare think we or the world knows. The best
achievement for any book. The Advocate writing takes us out of the ordinary and
magazine also lauded Bi Any Other Name as expands our view of the possible. Yet
one of the top 100 most influential standing on that edge alone can be scary.
Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual and Transgender One of the things that has surprised and
(LGBT) books of the last century. Because moved me about all three of the Book
it involves selecting, editing and Proposal Camps so far is how the writers
organizing works by large numbers of have come forward to support one other as
other authors, getting an anthology they stand on their respective edges. In
published poses unique challenges. But a each case, the students got deeply
book, written oneself from beginning to involved with each other's work,
end calls forth a whole other level of supported the variety of personal
trepidation. Loraine voiced a struggles that usually accompany writing
determination to not let "my own or other on the edge, and offered wisdom and
people's fear shut me down." feedback to keep one another on track.
At the time she began the Boot Camp, her This gave each student a way to help cope
dissertation had already sold 70 copies with and harness the fear usually
as a self-published document, and she had inherent in the process of getting
received excellent feedback from many published. Said Loraine,
readers. But now this cutting-edge author "Where there's fear there is power. As
seeks a larger audience. She won't tell Dorothy Allison, Audre Lorde, Marianne
the commercial publishers that Harlots Williamson and many other courageous
and Healers is based on a dissertation, women have taught me, writing through the
because too many of them might moan, fear, not giving it power, keeping one's
groan and glaze over, as they are wont to eye on the vision is what makes me a
do in response to work they know writer and a survivor."
originated in academia. So we're being Even when we do have our eye on a vision,
extra careful to help Loraine craft her executing it alone can prove difficult.
message for a popular audience. Working in a vacuum, without any feedback
So how did Loraine juice up her Overview? can leave an author poorly prepared for
As many of you already know, the Overview publication. Delicia said,
is the section of the book proposal that "Before Jill's course, I had
summarizes the book's contents. It often unsuccessfully written a proposal for my
begins with a "hook," or especially book. The feedback I received from both
interesting lead-in. At the class's the agent who agreed to read it and my
urging, Loraine rewrote her Overview to friends was that the elements of my story
begin with different scenarios of sexual were fascinating...but not the way I had
healers in action-something an editor presented it. Working with Jill and the
might find much more difficult to put other students, I realized that I was
down than the dry historical facts with avoiding telling the ugly parts of my
which she had previously begun. We all story, and in essence had avoided telling
cheered to read about the...well, I'm my story truthfully. My book was a series
blushing, so you'll just have to wait for of anecdotes without a theme, and now I
Harlots and Healers to hit the have much more focus on what I intend to
bookstores. Stay tuned! 'say' in my book and how to do it."
If writing from the edge of social and The truth isn't always pretty, and it
sexual norms fed Loraine's fear, writing certainly isn't always comfortable to put
from the edge of personal trauma fed forth. And yet, the journey of getting
Delicia Hegwood's, another student in the published often involves doing just that,
class. Penning a memoir entitled "This despite one's fears. If Loraine and
Torture is A Luxury" about how her Delicia could work with their fear, what
adventures in the Peace Corps brought her about you? What do you think you need to
face-to-face with some of her own inner move forward to publish the book inside
demons, Delicia had been playing it safe you?






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